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My first wish and last (Villanelle) by Bachus

If this one wish could just come true I'd believe that there's a heaven To share my life and heart with you When I forgot, you always knew I would roll the luckiest seven If this one wish could just come true You taught me how to rethink blue, and respect the love I have been given To share my life and heart with you I can appreciate the things you do Enough to let God know we're even If this one wish could just come true The shame of what I put you through Those nights you waited up past Eleven To share my life and heart with you Thank you for our son, he loves you too The way you're selfless, and enliven If this one wish could just come true To share my life and heart with you

x0lovelylarnx0 9-Oct-07/6:06 PM
Well Put together! Love it!




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