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Church Propagation (Free verse) by Dovina

As truth is forgotten, piety appears. As wisdom wanes, cleverness and knowledge shine. As peace declines, organization grips. When chaos arrives, A new church is born.

INTRANSIT 25-Aug-07/6:50 AM
" These degredations lead to arguments, which lead to stricter organization." The church chokes itself. I think this is the root of your poem. This format is too technical for me. Chase it if you will.




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