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On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday (Free verse) by poetandknowit

I realize I will no longer look at her the same, although she still skips from the school door, now she can dress on her own, smile with different meanings, brush her own hair.

poetandknowit 16-Sep-02/1:21 PM
Trust me there is no adventure, writer of triangle poems, in having a daughter with someone you thought you would accept a miserable existence with only to come home one day and find the place empty. To my luck: Yes, but the leftovers...hmmm. Divorce processes and being left behind to develop odd relationships with uh! female babies alone is not necessarily my idea of a good trek. But such are the cards. Are you being creatively ambiguous or just factually vague? Shall I write you a love poem? It would make things easier between us.




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