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Lullaby (Other) by lexxie100

Rain sing me a lullaby Keep it soft and slow Sing the song of nature Hear the moonlight glow Let the darkness be your blanket And the stars your nightlight Rain sing me a lullaby To help me sleep tonight

INTRANSIT 6-Jul-07/7:24 AM
I'm on the positive side here. Perhaps -memorie(s)- instead of night light. There's a subtle rythm in this poem.




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