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light [edited] (Haiku) by lmp

yellow-pink rind fades next to morning light's luster upon your soft skin

lmp 5-Jul-07/8:42 AM
but i was eating a grapefruit, peeling the rind. all that would be left of a peach is the pit:

pitted peach pit sits
glistening with juice in sun
drying somber brown.




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