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Farewell (Free verse) by Skamper

What say you - Conscience Yes, it’s the right thing to do… What say you - Guilt She got what’s coming… And you - Imagination Nothing, I’ve nothing to say… Excellent - it’s done then Yes

lmp 5-Jul-07/8:38 AM
agree with Dovina's coments and also with INTRANSIT. this does have a lot more potential, and you have shown us with previous work that you can polish this up.




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