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Deeper (Senryu) by Skamper

I do not fear love Nearly as much as I should Frighten me some more

Skamper 1-Jul-07/6:19 PM
the end of the line should give you the break needed, even after the first line there is a pause - if you read the whole thing pausing after each line there shouldn't be a problem.




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