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Deeper (Senryu) by Skamper

I do not fear love Nearly as much as I should Frighten me some more

Ranger 1-Jul-07/3:18 AM
Punctuate the end of line two, otherwise it reads: I do not fear love nearly as much as I should frighten me some more. Which is a little confusing.




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