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Summer Festival (Free verse) by Christof

During a day and a half of wind and rain There's no point bringing the washing in And the loose-limbed shirts and trouser legs The clinging bras and flapping skirts Slick with water like sweaty skin Dance a blissful drunken shrug And will not stop till the sun floods in.

Ranger 1-Jul-07/3:09 AM
If we want to solve third world water shortage, all we need to do is get Somalia to host Glastonbury and Wimbledon.

'Loose-limbed' is a bit cliche.




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