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light [edited] (Haiku) by lmp

yellow-pink rind fades next to morning light's luster upon your soft skin

nypoet22 30-Jun-07/12:15 AM
i'd like to see something juxtaposing the skin of the grapefruit with the skin of the lover. the conceit seems to want it.




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