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courtyard (Free verse) by lmp

i often hear: rain splashing upon the rock, the melody echoing off the walls. today: only silence, an eddied dance of white on wind.

lmp 29-Jun-07/3:27 PM
s1 is more "pedestrian" for lack of a better term. even a bit melancholy.

s2 is more zen, mystical, hushed, contemplative.

different weather, same place. different mood, same person.




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