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God and Country (Haiku) by dougsoderstrom

Prayers to Jesus, Flags a waving, Missiles launched from pews.

balthazar 16-Sep-02/9:33 AM
Doug, you're worse than the Katzenjammers with your own definitions of haiku! you tell someone different this each day. traditionally, a haiku is 5-7-5 syllables, with the last line turning a twist on the first two. as for the hypocricies of your faith, it depends on which book you read, old or new. who you listening to, God or Jesus? God would say strike these fuckers hard and heavy. Jesus would say turn the other cheek. guess whose ideas i like better.




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