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courtyard
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Free verse
) by
lmp
i often hear: rain splashing upon the rock, the melody echoing off the walls. today: only silence, an eddied dance of white on wind.
Dovina
29-Jun-07/3:03 PM
S1 is plain and easy. S2 is kind of haiku - very sparse. The two together seem mismatched.
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