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Win, Win, Lose, Lose (Free verse) by Dovina

A bioengineered nation, top-heavy with old, longevity treatments sold, replenishes its labor force with cheap service, jobs for young poor. Win-win Immigrants come and remain stubbornly foreign, unspeakably Spanish, unchangeably Muslim, un-American. Win-lose Neglecting to die, the old work on, suppressing the young, insulting the immigrants, demanding cheap service, unnaturally alive. Lose-lose

Prince of Void 29-Jun-07/7:42 AM
win,win
we die in this victory
what we lost in this misery
the happiness we lose or win
only lose,lose
we fall in this failure
that we could understand better
some lose ,some win
so what's american dream ?





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