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essence of a thought (Free verse) by lmp

no diaphanous membrane, this; bearing down upon the soul, a cascading megalith, crumbling resolve with no remorse. no soothing analgesic, this; burning holes in the heart like a ruptured caustic cyst, melting dreams, leaving despair. demolishing love with its force, a raging beast set on a course as darkness creeps from the abyss; banishing hope and sunlight, this. intimate, incessant constrictor of air, a garrotte made of silken hair wrapping tighter than a crushing fist; no mere flight of fancy, this.

ALChemy 28-Jun-07/12:10 PM
Seems like a very dark thought you're having. Well written and haunting. Reminds me of Rodin's sculptures.




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