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husk [hai-crete] (Haiku) by lmp

brittle empty skin easily crushed and bro ken f l i e s upon cold wind

lmp 28-Jun-07/11:08 AM
i could not find crshd in the dictionary. is it under "crashed", "crushed", or "cure-shod"? i could maybe use a different text or reduce the kerning to give the effect, but Notepad isn't so sophisticated. perhaps if it gets published (ha ha) the printing house can work on that.

and without the word "empty" the haiku police would be all over me for only having 3 syllables in the first line. "suuuuuure it is there", they would say as thay clapped me in irons.




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