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essence of a thought (Free verse) by lmp

no diaphanous membrane, this; bearing down upon the soul, a cascading megalith, crumbling resolve with no remorse. no soothing analgesic, this; burning holes in the heart like a ruptured caustic cyst, melting dreams, leaving despair. demolishing love with its force, a raging beast set on a course as darkness creeps from the abyss; banishing hope and sunlight, this. intimate, incessant constrictor of air, a garrotte made of silken hair wrapping tighter than a crushing fist; no mere flight of fancy, this.

lmp 26-Jun-07/1:27 PM
heh. i am glad that the rhyme scheme is so unsettling; that means it did what i wanted.

glad you liked this piece, and many thanks for the comments.




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