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The wait (Free verse) by aliena

I waited and waited Thinking, with each passing year The verse that would come forth Would be better. Not writing was good- It was just waiting. One fine day,I found That wisdom had wiped off poetry Peace and stillness overtaken joy.

Ranger 21-Jun-07/5:07 AM
The voices in my head are crying 'image! image!' Perhaps play around with the sound of 'poetry' and make it sound like 'pottery' - something being wiped off clay. I'd like that.




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