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Resume (Free verse) by drnick

Game over dreams come true happily ever after now what? Happy not comfortable lost inside eyes lost inside smile for time being. Worried while alone thoughts provoke false reality mocking at a dream. Haunted by a kiss sobering future somber skies fly at time of leaving. Bleeding burning wounds choking heart sobbing skin all too soon. Now resume.

drnick 16-Jun-07/12:25 PM
This is about a friend I've liked for a long time and who has recently told me she feels the same towards me. Thus the first two lines. The "nitty" are my thoughts/feelings towards the question of "now what?" as we are both moving away in about a month and a half. Personally I'm trying not to get too involved because of the impending move, but I'm finding that very hard to do. It's a tricky situation that I'm handling horribly. Thanks for letting me unload this upon you, whether or not you care ;)




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