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........ (Other) by Prince of Void

In the dark sanctuary where I pray for the love For those scars are concealed inside Forgetting whys and hows of the destiny I do not want to say how it could happen I mesmerize my words Within fettered heart in the stated delirium Moreover, dreams entwine me from time to time Within my mind from the ocean of your memories I do not find that eternal happiness of a god After thousand years of lives No wing for this fallen angel That he turned into a lover in the paradise lost I said enough The void that turned my colors into grey I have done enough The agony that buried me into that grave I have shed tears enough The beloved who can show me the love I haven’t felt enough The love, which I was born for that

Skamper 16-Jun-07/11:23 AM
I get the void part - only too well...It must be the language that I find difficult. line two do you mean scars? mesmerizing my words - not sure on that concept...putted me into grave? I haven't feel enough? Some lines seem to twist another way, just wanted to clarify.




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