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dps (Free verse) by decadentlaurel

i look at her she is reading i look still she looks i see the ground carpe diem i remember oh captain, my captain thoughts from the back of my head will i look again will our eyes meet will my heart flutter never to try never to jump never to fly waiting before me sits such beauty still all i see is the ground

<~> 16-Sep-02/7:30 AM
look up! look up! look up! although, there is a microcosm in the ground as well. (but i do not think that that discovery is what your heart longs for here) also, what is 'dps'?




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