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Resume (Free verse) by drnick

Game over dreams come true happily ever after now what? Happy not comfortable lost inside eyes lost inside smile for time being. Worried while alone thoughts provoke false reality mocking at a dream. Haunted by a kiss sobering future somber skies fly at time of leaving. Bleeding burning wounds choking heart sobbing skin all too soon. Now resume.

Dovina 15-Jun-07/2:16 PM
The first two verses say it all. The rest gets into the nitty of how and why. But Why do that?




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