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Empty (Free verse) by Skamper

Lipstick bleeds a trail over rails of broken teeth she sharpens Painting smiles on hardened glass shattering past the death reflection draped upon a covered skeleton On slickened path beauty faded fast ghosting dreams chase her uneven walk she talks - in love’s tongues Jaded history leads her to razored misery the delicate trickle glintz in ebony lights scarred womb rejects the failure

pete 15-Jun-07/6:34 AM
explanation will often ruin a poem, i know, but is this about an alcoholic suicide or lonesome solitude .... or something else entirely




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