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Persnickety (Other) by malpaso

well, ain't that a hang, banged up by the technology that was supposed to save you and I. I could have saved a dime, killed time, made rhyme but I chose to click a mouse, burn down the house, see what the chicken saw when he crossed road, played Faust. Here in the forsaken Expanse

malpaso 10-Jun-07/6:11 PM
your criticism is valid but if I could do narrative I'd be writing short stories and novels....seriously, narrative poetry is one of the best genres around but I just get too hung up in the middle of those i tried to write so i just figure i'd try and stamp concept or cluster of concepts and keep it short and sweet....i'm glad you had fun with it, that's what counts!!




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