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Persnickety (Other) by malpaso

well, ain't that a hang, banged up by the technology that was supposed to save you and I. I could have saved a dime, killed time, made rhyme but I chose to click a mouse, burn down the house, see what the chicken saw when he crossed road, played Faust. Here in the forsaken Expanse

Ranger 8-Jun-07/4:09 AM
Catchy, perhaps a little thin on the narrative depth, but still good fun to read aloud.




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