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The Red Chain (Free verse) by MacFrantic

The specialist completely as the junction completes me. It's here I fight to retain all and reflect my sinking apolgy on you. You imagine my hands as a chain wrapped red around your neck. You elect to scream when you are alone. Can I reject your sympathies: what sinfully decadent lovelies you construe? I might scream with you.

sca 7-Jun-07/12:57 AM
I don't understand the first line, and I'm not one for poetry that's so rephrased and rearanged it's fragmented, so this doesn't rate all that highly with me.




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