poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The North Wind by Ranger.

sca6 Jun 2007

There are all this tricky rhyme schemes in the world, but I reckon it's nice to see it taken back to basics once in a while. One on one, obvious yet not obtrusive. Lyrics or not.

I'd've written Said in the fifth line with a '. 'Said, short for I said. But I can be the queen of ideomaticity and colloquealist english. So I'd caution you against my advice.

But yes, I'd say if we polled it here and now missed 'I love you's would be the chief regret.

=> Jess