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On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday (Free verse) by poetandknowit

I realize I will no longer look at her the same, although she still skips from the school door, now she can dress on her own, smile with different meanings, brush her own hair.

nentwined 16-Sep-02/1:39 AM
I don't understand the "shape" of this poem. A slide? A method of distancing?

Ignoring the shape, I like the simplicity of statement. The rhythm is really strange, but it works.




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