poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus.

renwick15 Sep 2002

Other than this line:
"You claim my voice is false and charms"
,which could have been written better such as
"full of false charms" or something like that, I really like it. I like the part about fucking the sister. It takes guts or revenge to admit such a thing.