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garden spite (Free verse) by skaskowski

With absolute certainty it's time for such endeavors, I rip down the garden gate and beckon forth my neighbors. Pick! Eat! Till and toil, or simply sit and stare awhile. What you don't take the rabbits will, and fences make me ill.

nypoet22 28-May-07/7:43 AM
for awhile i thought this was about new jersey - the garden state... but yes, the first two lines seem unnecessary.




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