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Altitude (Free verse) by half.italian

With thoughts like helium whispers my mind billows out Reconfigured for weaving connections into intricate architechture. They build and join, scatter and duplicate until collapse Leaving bare copper on an unwinding coil.

daniella 20-May-07/9:26 PM
i'm sorry, it's just not well written.




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