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Worn Ruse (Free verse) by drnick

He'd like to touch you But you're not there. You're in a worn ruse He cannot see through. Silence guides in Thoughts, fears, lies. You will crush him A mind of depression. He'll contrive Your false mind And you'll do What you need to. Logic signs Pass him by Another worn ruse He will not see through.

drnick 1-May-07/10:36 AM
She's in a worn ruse that is acted by his mind. He doesn't see through it because it is a psychological disorder of some sort. I realize that I need to develop that thought so as the reader has a better understanding. Thank you!




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