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Worn Ruse (Free verse) by drnick

He'd like to touch you But you're not there. You're in a worn ruse He cannot see through. Silence guides in Thoughts, fears, lies. You will crush him A mind of depression. He'll contrive Your false mind And you'll do What you need to. Logic signs Pass him by Another worn ruse He will not see through.

Dovina 30-Apr-07/3:03 PM
Is she "in" a worn ruse, or acting it? And if it's worn (as in seen by him before) why is he not seeing through it?




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