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What it Feels Like (Free verse) by laurahenn2010

A touch of your skin on mine A brush of our lips as they touch A look into your eyes A smile completes the rush A touch on my waist The close of a moments kiss To open my eyes and see the only thing that matters It's how I describe my heavenly bliss Arms wrapped around me My head lies on your chest Hearing the breath escape our lips This is how it must feel to be perfectly at rest

laurahenn2010 26-Apr-07/12:14 PM
awe thank you!! I am tryng, and I just use it as an opening for what I'm feeling, I'll have to submit a couple others, but those are all rather....gruesome in ways. Thanks you for giving me POSITIVE feedback. I appreciate it.




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