SupremeDreamer23 Apr 2007

stairs- stares. Unless there's some sort of pun intended.

That aside, I think you shouldn't have tried to make this a lyric. But, there is a lot of interesting segments in this that kindles my interest, like stanza one, three, and the refrain(s).

It also reminds of how I used "ation" in most of my last post.. though I hadn't contrived it.. nevermind that, I'm woolgathering.

Anyway, I give it a six over-all.