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Quatrain (Other) by ALChemy

Babies are born from the bowels of beauty and monsters are born from the minds of men. So if all men come up from babies are not monsters beauty's kin?

lmp 16-Apr-07/6:14 PM
hmmm.


lose the "so" in line 3. it just doesn't work somehow.

i like where this goes, and it opens a host of discussion points about humanity, good and evil, etc. maybe the last word should be "sin", and then we can really throw some fuel on the fire, eh?




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