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Prince of Void
(
Free verse
) by
Dovina
Ashes of the late world carry on bleak and temporal mocking to and fro the princeâs void uncoupled from his shoring unsupported in ashen air trembling and brief If only his heart were stone
bwaha
14-Apr-07/9:08 PM
How does something "[mock] to and fro"?...That line confuses me, slightly.
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