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Empty (Free verse) by Skamper

Lipstick bleeds a trail over rails of broken teeth she sharpens Painting smiles on hardened glass shattering past the death reflection draped upon a covered skeleton On slickened path beauty faded fast ghosting dreams chase her uneven walk she talks - in love’s tongues Jaded history leads her to razored misery the delicate trickle glintz in ebony lights scarred womb rejects the failure

Skamper 30-Mar-07/5:16 PM
Grammar, it's always such a sticking point. I will learn no doubt, then it might become natural, like what I write is to me now! Someone might just get me anyway, that's the one I want to reach...




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