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Guarded Fool (Free verse) by drnick

Inside your simple system I wish to be imprisoned, with rules and regulations I will grow. Containment cannot break me, but I hope that it will make me a cold and lonely soldier strongly sewed. Within my strengthened skin, I will hide and not let in any single person near or far. While in this solemn state, I dream to have what it takes to feel and be alive without guard.

drnick 29-Mar-07/3:16 PM
I'm glad I could remind you of anything to do with slaughter. That is my purpose.




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