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Guarded Fool (Free verse) by drnick

Inside your simple system I wish to be imprisoned, with rules and regulations I will grow. Containment cannot break me, but I hope that it will make me a cold and lonely soldier strongly sewed. Within my strengthened skin, I will hide and not let in any single person near or far. While in this solemn state, I dream to have what it takes to feel and be alive without guard.

drnick 29-Mar-07/3:15 PM
I'm glad you held hope that a poem of mine was not rubbish, but perhaps this is because you don't know me. This poem is, as all of mine are, up for the reader to decide. It's whatever you think it's about.




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