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Hairball (Haiku) by jessicazee

That thing on my rug, I forgot to wipe it up. Thank my cat for that.

richa 25-Mar-07/12:01 PM
Haiku should be two images that intersect. This isn't. Also it is ambiguous. Are you thanking the cat for wiping it up or for making it.




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