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Guarded Fool (Free verse) by drnick

Inside your simple system I wish to be imprisoned, with rules and regulations I will grow. Containment cannot break me, but I hope that it will make me a cold and lonely soldier strongly sewed. Within my strengthened skin, I will hide and not let in any single person near or far. While in this solemn state, I dream to have what it takes to feel and be alive without guard.

Skamper 24-Mar-07/8:39 PM
Love this! So stringent, seems to hold form of a rhyme scheme then loses it, excellently played out, not only in words but in the way the mind tries to be bound by form, only to lose it and let it flow...make sense? I usually don't...




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