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Hairball (Haiku) by jessicazee

That thing on my rug, I forgot to wipe it up. Thank my cat for that.

Dovina 24-Mar-07/5:58 AM
Writers in English often think haiku must have three lines with 5, 7, and 5 syllables, a misunderstanding of the Japanese onji. Concision is key.

thing on my rug,
I forgot to wipe
thank you cat

Just a suggestion.




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