Dental Panic21 Mar 2007
so why call it haiku? 'short poem' will do fine.
I find a touch of sentiment in this one:
even when I'm in Kyoto
when I hear the cuckoo
I long for Kyoto
still, it's more of an observation of a sentiment.
But this is one of the best:
Old pond
Frog jumps in
Splash!
(both are by Basho)