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Life : Paradox (Free verse) by amateurR

Life: so profound yet so simple Takes a lifetime to understand, Can be explained in one word. Life: so strong yet so fragile Causes one to believe in miracles Can make one lose faith in everything Life: so our own yet so not Makes us follow our heart Can break a million hearts Life: so insignificant yet so effective Becomes but a number for some Leaves another life changed Life: so short yet never ceases to exist The end is uncertain, almost always too soon But is lived through love left behind.

kawakurdi 14-Sep-02/1:59 PM
Very thoughtful and expressive. I think life takes many lifetimes to understand. Many times I wish our short life were only an experience to learn from and we had another chance.. to live with the benefit of hindsight. There are so many many things to understand and judge correctly. I like the last line. Very good conclusion.




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