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Her Mitts (Free verse) by Nepanthe

My mitts are hermits, their land is each hand, knitted, well fitted, bold in the cold. A hand's haven between action, brings warmth and satisfaction. Comfortable within my skin, I'll remove my mittens for my kin. My hands may brave the Winter's groan, for the friend without mitts of her own.

Ranger 13-Mar-07/1:59 PM
May I make another suggestion? Keep the internal rhymes going throughout, they work well in the first stanza.

And be prepared for people to read 'My hands brave the Winter's groin'.




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