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snacktime
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Free verse
) by
jesslew
little ray of sunshine oh how i love snacktime everyone needs potassium bananas are edible smiles they last with you for miles
Ranger
13-Mar-07/1:48 PM
Cute, richa's right about the last line though. Pick something less bland to say.
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