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snacktime (Free verse) by jesslew

little ray of sunshine oh how i love snacktime everyone needs potassium bananas are edible smiles they last with you for miles

richa 13-Mar-07/12:11 PM
Don't like the last line. Like the whimsy of 'bananas are edible smiles' and the idiosyncrasy of 'everyone needs potassium.




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