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Hurt (Free verse) by Bethy

As you turned and walked away, the painted smile upon my face, shows faint signs of cracking. Small droplets begin to form, at the corner of my eyes, and slowly, painfully, drift downward, pooling, dripping, from the fullness of my lips, and then vanish, in the knit of my sweater.

Dr Peter Douglas 10-Mar-07/2:35 PM
Hello Bethy
Thankyou for being kind about my poetry.
Sadly thanks to the likes of steve robbins,edna sweetlove, mrc***t and a few others i am leaving the site, i expect comments on my poems not very personal attacks. I will be moving to another site and i will email you with that site not via this public use.
Very best wishes to you
Peter.




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