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The Laws of Life (Free verse) by lrustagi

the design of destiny oh! so bright, yet so dull full of flurry an' floral flourish bridle is there in thou hands behind the overture lies the fact zealous smith has all the impact the walls of wisdom oh! so suave, yet so subtle risk to climb, may get 'cross thinkin' twice, thou must've lost break'em apart, does one gain hue an' cry all in vain the test of truth oh! so simple, yet so 'cerbic much to merit, nought to lose adhere to it, thou go steered fist it firm an' hold it tight chooseth dark or chooseth light the vice of vanity oh! so 'ttractive, yet so frothy inner man knows it all put thyself to bare fire crisp the cast, thou walk out cleanse the outer, hence inner stout the glow of God oh! so brilliant, yet so faint sparkle of diamond, rays of hope 'xtends His hand to all created bask thyself in holy stall cross thou commit, may burn thou all.

jessicazee 1-Mar-07/3:04 AM
Courageous (sp?) and well-tought-out. 8.9




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